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Jim and Kate’s scene.
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Come on Annie, we only got
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MAGGIE
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With a clear, pure light, Like a little candle burning in the night; In this world of darkness, we must shine, You in your small corner, And I in mine. Well He sees and knows it if our light grows dim; He looks down from Heaven to see us shine You in your small corner, And I in mine. Many kinds of darkness in the world abound; Sin and… |
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The girls are horrified.
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MAGGIE
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The girls join
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BERT
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Charlie, the gut girls is out.
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Warns (HARRY&
Jim exit in different coats and caps)
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Ere, Maggie, you ain’t
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Oh, Len, you’re such a lump
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Joshes She chunks him on the shoulder.
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KATE
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How old are you?
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Explore
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ANNIE
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Sixteen
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MAGGIE
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Where do you live
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Possibly Jim and Harry’s scene.
I think if we have all the girls sing at the end it will make more sense.
ReplyDeleteAnd if we dim the lights as they are singing then drop the chains as the lights go out
ReplyDeleteMake sure you react to every line but not anticipate it
ReplyDeleteRemember to follow lines quickly and act like it's the first time to ever say or do whatever you are doing.
ReplyDeleteAs long as we comit this to memory, we will have a well-paced show that no longer has fear of running over time.
ReplyDeleteremember to have a reason to exit and enter and make your decisions more obvious
ReplyDeleteAt the very beginning, Harry sounds like he's somewhat straining to get out those very important first notes. If he could loosen up and make his voice as deep and resonant as possible, this would greatly help the introductory scene
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