5
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Especially that
Ellen
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10
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How did it
go?
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15
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I thought to
myself
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20
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Edwin: Picture
of Jesus
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25
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Lord will
provide
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30
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You were
harsh
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35
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I was at the
mercy
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36:12
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Everyone
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Act and react – listen
Wait a beat, do the fart face (if you haven’t
reacted), before exiting the scene.
All actors fill out costume plots and turn
in on Monday.
Pay $5 and list what you want as snacks.
I need to know what you want from Subway
for Saturday’s lunch.
On Friday, be in my room by 9. Wear T
shirts. We will leave SHS at 9:45 and
will eat at Furrs on return.
Monday and Tuesday – rehearsals at 5:30
No rehearsal Thursday because of track
meet.
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LEN
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Ask for help to make you more repulsive.
What a woman? Drink, ahh and belch
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Maggie
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Look to see that Harry is gone before
saying you’ve got to watch him
Good evening lord tartaden
Wear shawl whenever you are out.
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Harry
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Don’t touch Lady H’s arm as she exits – bow
or something as a good bye.
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Annie
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Examined for diseases
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Gut girls
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Make a big a transition as Maggie does when
getting to go outside to eat sarnies – make sure that everyone knows you are
outside. Weather is cold, but smells
so much better.
Don’t let laughter die abruptly after
fallen women. Maggie have more fun
with that scene. Laugh so hard that
you almost wet your pants. – let the frivolity melt into the lantern scene.
Lantern scene – amazed words
Crikey
Bloody marvelous
This is one off
It’s spiffing – good
I’m gobsmacked – surprised
Quiet moving furniture in scene where Lady
H and Priscilla are talking about the bruise
Lord will provide – squeal laugh – you finally
figured out why Polly has so many pockets – watch out for Harry
Faces out at the end.
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Emily & Annie
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Make it obvious Emily is telling Annie
about sheep gutting.
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JIm
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React to Ellen saying – Lady H wants to
change women not men. Beat then exit.
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Lady H
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Flabbergasted that Polly has finished.
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Maids
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Be sure to be amazed by lantern
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Priscilla, Helena, Tarty and Arthur
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Gloves off in houses
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I think everyone needs to work on staying consistent with their accents. It takes everyone a while to get into character, but once everyone does it looks much more natural. Try and flow together better and don't look expectant for each line. Y'all are doing great!
ReplyDeletei think Jonah's character has improved so much! I still think you can play more of a douche though. Mark i think you can be more gross. don't be afraid to make a fool of yourself!! because you are a fool to us as Len (sorry) Brooke i can tell your diction has gotten so much better!! Be sure to watch your breath and the way your mouth is because sometimes it looks like you're smiling. I'm so proud of us!
ReplyDeleteIn know in the first scenes i feel like I can't move or make any noise but like they said yesterday, the audience will only remember our actions really so it's important that we are still big like the time we did it silently. I also think that some of the ideas and little things like showing how your character has changed through every scene that we focused on at the beginning of the season should be brought back. We have a great show now we just have to focus on the little things
ReplyDeleteI LOVED how Lou played with tempo. It made a huge difference especially if there are multiple Tempo in one sentence. Also remember to pronounce endings more. We lost both on Sunday.
ReplyDeletei have more things to add after we had Stacey come and critique us. I loved what she said to Maky and Eli! i never thought about this but you do need to develops a relationship so fast with Ash. this man has taken every ounce of trust and hope you have. you are insecure and rely on him with everything. so why would you open up so quickly to a stranger? be more guarded and fragile. Eli, you shouldn't have to put your hands on Maky to let us know you are an abusive man. This has probably been going on since you met her so maybe you're thing isn't necessarily hitting her anymore. maybe you find something to do that's just as worse. does that make sense? maky fears you every time you walk in the door. she doesn't need to be hit to know you are abusive.
ReplyDeletedon't need to**** my bad
DeleteI work on being more repulsive
ReplyDeleteDon't forget to enunciate every consonant you can if u need a tip try saying your lines more slowly that really helps with pronounciation
ReplyDeleteI like the ending and the energy and we need to keep it up at area to blow away the judges.
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ReplyDeleteHave a steady place throughout the show and make sure consonants are hit.
ReplyDeleteThe ending has now become amazing!!! We just have to make sure we don't go over time.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the end! Make sure to watch the lighting in Ellen's room scene. Try to lean into each other more to get in to the light. So proud of y'all, keep up the hard work!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the biggest things for me. During the slow motion scenes, it appears as if half of you are moving in a slightly jarring manner. If you would pretend that you are underwater in these scenes, it would make your movements much more fluid and natural while still maintaining that level of resistance against your jarring body motions
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